Piwakawaka and Kakapo loves the autumn season. We read books and watched some videos on autumn. Next we wrote an information report about autumn. After that we decide to use the information we had gathered to write some poems about autumn. Finally we used real dried and presses autumn leaves to make a frame to put our published autumn poem on. We really enjoyed doing this activity.
Kia ora, my name is Liukovi and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you made it like it was autumn. It made me think about so much about autumn. Have you thought about making your writing font a bit clear? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Beckett I am a year three in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you show your frames. It made me think about when we did it. Have you thought about making the font possible to read it? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, my name is Isabella and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you used real leaves. It made it look really cool. It made me think about autumn leaves falling from a tree . Have you thought about adding more information? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, my name is Leeya and I am a Year three in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you made them into interesting poems about autumn. It made me think about when I did it in Piwakawaka and Kakapo last year . Have you thought about when you do it next time you could make them into a piece of writing? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Eliza and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like that you did it about autumn. I like autumn too. It made me think about lying in leaves. Have you thought about having fun because it’s not the same as winter? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
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ReplyDeleteGreetings, my name is Jp and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the yummy things you put on there. It made me think about eating and drinking hot chocolate. Have you thought about not making me hungry and having a video of the kids saying the poem? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there , my name is Tyler and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you show your work. It made me think about when 2 year ago I did this activity. Have you thought about changing the hot chocolate to something else warm to eat? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHello, my name is Saber and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the autumn leaves around your writing. It made me think about how many leaves are in autumn . Have you thought about adding more writing? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
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ReplyDeleteHello, my name is Ryan and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the autumn leaves. It made me think about being in May . Have you thought about making a video of how to make this? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Stellan and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the outside frame. It made me think about trees . Have you thought about drawing picture to match your poems? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Chantz and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the frame of the autumn poem It made me think about autumn really cold . Have you thought about making the fount and the size easier to see? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Reyansh and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really how you did it. It made me think about how fun it was . Have you thought about making a video of how to make it? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is https://wpsreyanshs.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Ryder and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you did the detail. It made me think about how smart you guys are. Have you thought about could you make the writing bigger? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, my name is Romeo and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School.I really like the ideas for autumn. It made me think about having hot chocolate every morning. Have you thought about putting pictures in about autumn? If you would like to see my learning, My class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Darcey-rose and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like how you put a lot of effort into doing this It made me think about snuggling in a warm blanket with a hot cup of chocolate. Have you thought about adding more pictures about what you have been learning about? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora tamariki! I love these poems, especially all the wonderful adjectives you have used. What a cool idea to use real leaves to frame them too. You know what would be really cool, to make a video of you reading out your poems...
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